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From: guest (guest)
, 103 months, post #1 |
Mick attacked Dean on th 19th February because he raped his wife,
Linda. Mick held his foot on Dean's throat; subsequently, Nancy had
to use a stool and smash it on Mick's head for him to stop
attacking. Mick and Nancy looked at Dean's lifeless body � which
Dean looked pretty much dead. Nancy, then went to call for some
help. Meanwhile, looking at Dean's body � Mick thought his plans
would be over. Little did he know, that his problems were only just
beginning.
Mick looked at Dean's lifeless body � and wished that Dean was
dead, only for the sake of his family. Dean managed to wake up, but
went to get up � but something was amiss when he did. He saw Mick
staring down at the position of where he was � but was more freaked
out when he saw his body out cold in front of him. It was him
alright; he � or should I say Dean was dead!
Looking at his hands, Dean started to freak out. He was young, and
he made one stupid mistake, that ended up with him dying. He knew
raped Linda but did not want to acknowledge what he had done. When
Dean saw Mick looking down at his former body, he spotted an
opportunity. He had always wanted to be Mick � and what better way
than to possess him. Dean thought that at least then he would be
Shirley's prefect son.
Getting ready to possess Mick, Dean walked towards Mick's body
until his ghostly spirit met with Mick's body. When Dean did this,
he looked down at his hands. They looked different. Bigger. He went
to feel his face, he had more facial hair. When he went to speak,
his voice was deeper, and more mature. Rushing out of the Vic
cellar, he went to look at his reflection in the mirror. Dean saw
Mick's reflection looking back at him.
Realising that Nancy was going to get the police involved, he
quickly rushed after her. Once he caught up with her, he told her
that Dean escaped � and subsequently, Dean as Mick locked the
cellar doors so no-one would discover his dead body. Dean enjoyed
being under Mick's skin. The prefect body, skin and
personality...the life Dean wished he had.
Lee was heading down to the cellar, and when Dean saw this, he
quickly went to confront him.
�Dad, I am going into the cellar but the door is locked�, said Lee.
�Lee, ummm�.I locked the doors, because of a leakage�, said Dean,
in Mick's body.
�Are you sure, Dad? I mean�.�, said Lee confused.
�Mick attacked me earlier�.and that's why...�, said Dean. Dean
immediately froze when he said this because the look on Lee's face
said it all.
�What do you mean Dad? Why did you refer to yourself in the third
person?� said Lee.
Dean realised the game was up. How was he going to get out of this
mess? Dean thought of a clever idea. Dean decided to jump from
Mick's into Lee's body.
When Mick saw round, he was confused to see Lee rather than be
staring down at Dean's body.
�Son, what am I doing here. I was just...�, said Mick.
�You were explaining to me that you attacked Dean, but he left the
Vic. Dad, you have got to be careful with your temper�, said Dean
as Lee. Dean hoped he could fool his brother, into believing he was
Lee.
�Likewise son. I should check...�, said Mick.
�No no. You said he left already. But I will double-check.�, said
Dean.
�Thank you son.�, said Mick.
Mick then left to go to the front of the bar. Dean as Lee entered
the cellar, and looked at his body. How was he going to get rid of
his own body? Dean actually liked the thought that he could possess
other bodies, and therefore did Dean's trademark smile.
Was Dean going to get rumbled? Would Nancy find out that her dad
did kill Dean? Would the Carters find out that Dean could possess
any one of them, at a given time?
What do you think? How should I continue it?
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From: guest
, 103 months, post #2 |
I like the concept, but do you mind if I suggest that he get more
powers as a ghost?
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